Been Mount Rough Cut

This evaluation refers to Question... 3

This is the first rough cut of my trailer that I produced. I think that the trailer is quite effective but is nowhere near the finished product as the sound needs dubbing down as well as one scene being in different colour to the rest of the scenes. The editing is also a bit rough and I think that some of the scenes need to be reorganised so that the narratives are clearer and make more sense.

I showed it to the rest of my class to get some positive and negative feedback that I could work on to improve my final piece. Positive feedback included:

• Effective choice of song as it matches the on screen actions
• Good opening with clear narrative and audience can tell what's happening
• Used a range of camera shots/angles that represent the genre well

Negative feedback included:

• Continuity issue as one of the scenes is in pink
• Sound needs dubbing down when people are talking
• Title cards should be consecutive, one after another, perhaps at the end?

I took this feedback on board and made the suggested changes to my trailer.